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This here is my first real attempt to produce a presentable animation.

Johnny Bravo approves.

Any and all feedback and constructive criticism is welcomed and encouraged.

MLP (c) Hasbro
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InkRose98 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Here's my constructive criticism: The way the mane and body bounces up and down is very well done. The shading is also nicely done as well, and consistent except for her jaw shadow, which recedes as she bounces upwards.
The only problem I have with this animation is the tail. As she bounces upwards it looks like the tail is extending and growing outwards, instead of bending upwards. Instead of having the whole back end of her tail flip up when she bounces, perhaps you could just have the tail bounce up and straiten a bit.
Besides that little issue, this animation is adorable. You should keep on animating!
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XanderReh Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a whole bunch! :D

I have another animation in the works that's a bit longer and I'll be sure to keep your comment in mind when working on it. ;)
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Harmonya-sama Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just epic <3
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Lomeo Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
:D
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Rebron-y Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oppa twilight style.
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maverick92193 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do the monkey with me!
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XanderReh Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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maverick92193 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was the best reply ever. Of all time.
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BrutalityInc Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
What's this dance called again?
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XanderReh Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I believe it's called the Monkey. :)
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